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Promise..

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Promise

 

A promise is a word spoken by the heart
It stays in your heart until you do what you promised
people think promise is only a word
but i think that only true hearts can say it
you break someone’s heart because you broke a promise
and it happens because of a simple word
To me it’s a hard word to say
because i cant be sure if i can keep it all day

 

 :: written when i was 13 ::

 

posted under Poetry
6 Comments to

“Promise..”

  1. On January 20th, 2006 at 10:12 pm sadia Says:

    what a cute little poem!

  2. On January 21st, 2006 at 8:06 pm pinkie Says:

    thats so sweet! thanks for sharing dear :) its cute that u wrote abt something with a big meaning at a young age :)

  3. On January 21st, 2006 at 9:30 pm candleofhope Says:

    am glad u two liked my poem..
    though it is EXTREMELY short… but i eliminated alotta lines..
    i preferred it this way :)

  4. On January 22nd, 2006 at 2:19 pm uaebelle Says:

    Ahhh
    Ur so cute LOL!
    So sweeeeeeeet really!

  5. On January 25th, 2006 at 10:29 pm Abdulrahman Says:

    i liked it ,,
    u are right about promises ,, that when someone say it he should keep it up
    it is really hard sometimes to keep it up specially with closest people to u
    that u dont want to hurt their feelings at all !!

    i think that the person who cant keep up his promise ( carelessly )
    is not that good to be my friend and to be trusted ..

    Really nice words for a 13 years .. (Mashallah 3lych)

  6. On June 2nd, 2006 at 9:15 pm Ancient Clown Says:

    This is a beautiful poem through the eyes of a child that capture a truth most adults have ignored and lost. Another one in a similar mindset is “SORRY”. Saying you’re “SORRY”, only means ‘you’re sorry you didn’t get away with it’. Being SORRY means ‘it doesn’t happen again’.
    You are a very observant child.
    your humble servant,
    Ancient Clown

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