Promise..
January20
Promise
A promise is a word spoken by the heart
It stays in your heart until you do what you promised
people think promise is only a word
but i think that only true hearts can say it
you break someone’s heart because you broke a promise
and it happens because of a simple word
To me it’s a hard word to say
because i cant be sure if i can keep it all day
:: written when i was 13 ::
what a cute little poem!
thats so sweet! thanks for sharing dear
its cute that u wrote abt something with a big meaning at a young age
am glad u two liked my poem..
though it is EXTREMELY short… but i eliminated alotta lines..
i preferred it this way
Ahhh
Ur so cute LOL!
So sweeeeeeeet really!
i liked it ,,
u are right about promises ,, that when someone say it he should keep it up
it is really hard sometimes to keep it up specially with closest people to u
that u dont want to hurt their feelings at all !!
i think that the person who cant keep up his promise ( carelessly )
is not that good to be my friend and to be trusted ..
Really nice words for a 13 years .. (Mashallah 3lych)
This is a beautiful poem through the eyes of a child that capture a truth most adults have ignored and lost. Another one in a similar mindset is “SORRY”. Saying you’re “SORRY”, only means ‘you’re sorry you didn’t get away with it’. Being SORRY means ‘it doesn’t happen again’.
You are a very observant child.
your humble servant,
Ancient Clown