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Her Peaceful Smile

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She smiled that night with rejoice 
Knowing that she had no other choice 
The pain in her eyes was revealed 
Though she said that she got healed
Her eyes could reflect the sadness and remorse
In order to fool me she had to take a special course
I knew that night that the time has come
Because she told me not to let my pain over come
I hoped that it was all just a dream
Because her smile made me lose me self esteem
Moments later, I knew she traveled a thousand mile
I knew about her death through her peaceful smile
 

posted under Poetry
10 Comments to

“Her Peaceful Smile”

  1. On May 24th, 2006 at 10:06 pm MooNi Says:

    iTs such a wonderful poem … wish u luck ;)

  2. On May 26th, 2006 at 9:48 pm noor Says:

    its saaaaaaaaad.. very nice =’)

  3. On May 28th, 2006 at 5:31 pm UAE Belle Says:

    Mashallah, amazing poem!

  4. On May 28th, 2006 at 6:54 pm S-Dolphin Says:

    nice poem mashalla

  5. On May 29th, 2006 at 1:53 am be Says:

    nice poem

  6. On May 29th, 2006 at 3:24 pm Maryam Says:

    Salaam…beautiful!

  7. On June 6th, 2006 at 8:12 pm Noo00oory Says:

    waw great words full of deep emotions

    very sad, it touches me so deeply
    may Allah mercy her,life is going on
    nice poem keep going candle

  8. On June 30th, 2006 at 2:09 am Fayt~ Says:

    Wow! very touching~! Great poem!

  9. On September 4th, 2006 at 12:51 pm Best Friendaitech.. Says:

    Hey Best Friendaite,
    That was a nice poem … well written and touching..
    T.c.
    A.

  10. On February 17th, 2010 at 8:07 am Bu Thyab Says:

    very well written, tabarak Allah. It’s great to read rhythmic poems, good job!!

    very sad, but peaceful? maybe, we would like to think so. This reminded me about terminally-ill patients, and how some could not bare the pain even with large doses of morphine, pretty unfortunate and quite sad.

    nice poem!

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