Her Peaceful Smile
May24
She smiled that night with rejoice
Knowing that she had no other choice
The pain in her eyes was revealed
Though she said that she got healed
Her eyes could reflect the sadness and remorse
In order to fool me she had to take a special course
I knew that night that the time has come
Because she told me not to let my pain over come
I hoped that it was all just a dream
Because her smile made me lose me self esteem
Moments later, I knew she traveled a thousand mile
I knew about her death through her peaceful smile
iTs such a wonderful poem … wish u luck
its saaaaaaaaad.. very nice =’)
Mashallah, amazing poem!
nice poem mashalla
nice poem
Salaam…beautiful!
waw great words full of deep emotions
very sad, it touches me so deeply
may Allah mercy her,life is going on
nice poem keep going candle
Wow! very touching~! Great poem!
Hey Best Friendaite,
That was a nice poem … well written and touching..
T.c.
A.
very well written, tabarak Allah. It’s great to read rhythmic poems, good job!!
very sad, but peaceful? maybe, we would like to think so. This reminded me about terminally-ill patients, and how some could not bare the pain even with large doses of morphine, pretty unfortunate and quite sad.
nice poem!